Monday, August 17, 2015

First Lines

Juleah's term paper came back unsullied by editorial red, save the obese F and a terse, slanting note:
"Well-written (no surprise) but factually ignorant. Next semester, consider actually reading your father's novel."

So, is this a gripping line? Is it Kafka's axe, smashing the frozen sea? Or just a herring trying to cut down a tree? Feel free to let me know.

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