From Pencil to Published

My first published story--Inevitability--went through something near fifteen drafts before it was ready. Just to get a glimpse of my revision process, I thought it'd be fun to take a look at the very first draft (circa April 2004) and the one published (circa April 2010). Click the images to enlarge.

the 2004 draft of "OTB":






















And what it became six years later--"Inevitability."